The sound of the gun leaving the barrel bang bang.
Turn around the corner another brother is taken away.
Turn the corner again now a thief with a 45 pointing it at my bro head im scared we gon die.
October 30th scared to go outside because they say it brings up from the enemies dead.
Walking down the corner in the ally, drugs being sold and people are dead. Now the projects Where most people grow up. Being on them streets is really hard its like you the devil trying to fight the angels all day and night.
Come on now let’s make a change 2x
These guns ain’t fun let’s have some fun and lets us all kids play, Let us go to the park have a good game of one on one instead of being in the house bored and not having fun
I like your rap because it tells a story while being real and relatable and really seem like you know a lot about gun violence.
I like the line “Turn the corner again now a thief with a 45 pointing it at my bro head I’m scared we gon die.” because it’s and explains of something that happens everyday.
calm, next time add more to your poem so we can get the deeper meaning of it.